[Art] Assassin I-232

I realize that the head is kind of big in proportion to the rest of the body, but I gave it a lot of lead so I'm showing it off anyways.


He looks a magnificent lot better in close view, right next to the agenda I drew him in.

I don't care for it at all, it is too choppy. And the proportions are way off.

It's a bad camera, if that's what you pointed out.

With proportions...
Notice this quote:

Me wrote:I realize that the head is kind of big in proportion to the rest of the body,

I know, I was just restating it, don't get so defensive.

WHO'S DEFENSIVE?! NOT ME!!

Lol, and that I took the picture from an angle, which is why his legs are small. He looks better in real-life. It really effects the sizes.

but none of this expresses your lack of ability to comprehend the art of shading.

Just tell me where I need to improve exactly, please?

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I'm also attempting Ratchet and...ooh! I finally got him--no, that's a potato. I drew a potato...

trust me. all those realistic pictures you see? that isn't due to the art. hell, the art usually is a bunch of sketch marks. Its the coloring and shading that takes the most time.

I don't like freehand drawings being shown off since it hasn't been done to the best of its ability

Just tell me where I need to improve exactly, please?

ok then:

1.) add in shading.