Life & Death

Here we go, my solo comic project, Life&Death. It will be updated on a 'page-at-a-time' system. Cookie to whoever guesses what program I made this in (Exept you, HAWKEYE.)
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it's very good

thank you.

this is my third fucking tie writing this post as i keep hitting a maintenece obstacle.

anywho,

Looks ok. Nees a lot of fine-tuning, i guess i can stand to read it. hope you got a good script to make up for the art

(btw, my other posts were much, MUCH, longer than this. i simplified it)

and im guessing the B.G is like that cuz there in a different space or somethin?

Yeah, page three looks much better than these so far.

And yes, imo the script is good enough to make up for the not-quite-Oscar-quality art.

And, yeeeah... kinda, I guess you could say that they're in a diferent space.

...im guessing you wernt really thinking bout that ...were you?

lol at the Oscar-like-quality joke.

riku1gundam wrote:...im guessing you wernt really thinking bout that ...were you?

Actually I was, but that's not really how I'd describe it...
Also: Page three is up! =)

sweet,
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..
if only you could shade.
nad draw hands. it would make even something like this look epic, lol

I can draw hands, close up, butthe tool set is annoying for drawing them farther away. And the selection tool isn't working, so shading won't happen until it starts working.

I have a sugestion, you should finish the comic and then post it...
I'm so intence now because I want to see more of L&D...

pages 4, 5, and 6 are up.

Damian wrote:pages 4, 5, and 6 are up.

yeah,I'm happyer now

page seven.

*sits and waits for more*

don't expect page 8 to be out for a little while.

Damian wrote:don't expect page 8 to be out for a little while.

okay,but how long will it last (waiting)???

*shrugs* A little while. An hour, maybe a day, idk.

Damian wrote:*shrugs* A little while. An hour, maybe a day, idk.

okay,that isn't to long...

page eight is up. Not quite right...

me don't like page 8 (I don't like the horn)

Yeah, I made the horn, then changed my mind, but I couldn't edit it out without re doing the entire page, so....

Damian wrote:Yeah, I made the horn, then changed my mind, but I couldn't edit it out without re doing the entire page, so....

crap, you should try to add another horn...
I think that it will be better, if not then left it like this...

The story sound's good so far, though I have to say the horn looks pretty incongruous.

Damian I've been waiting for eternity...
do you gave up???